The plot is well thought out. It sounds like a really good mission to be involved in. My only question relates to both Scenes 1 and 2: What types of skills
These are good points. Ultimately, the premise was built around the desired action (overland scene plus an annoying observer). The plot is weak and is very
For your consideration, while we're considering and discussing. Feedback is always good. :) ** GC Introduction, From Rwanda With Love Brigadier General
I'm not grasping the action here. I like the concept of being sent on a bunk mission by a traitor Control, and like what I think is going on here, but it