... That's way cool, I've just had a good chuckle going through and reading it. What would be even better would be if a remotely complete version of the first...
... Per was working on one. I've got one of my own, which I can upload if there's no problem with my trespassing on Swedish turf. Oh, and I'd appreciate it if...
... Well, the Swede is far far overdue, so by all means upload now and suffer Scandinavian flammage afterwards. Then at least I can print it out and stick it...
... I'll have a go soon. ... I'll leave it in, then. There will be some editing required elsewhere, though. ... How about a Sharp-style unmappable muddle of...
... I've got a full and sort-of-edited version if anyone wants it (presuming we're still talking about the original YS). ... Not me, squire. According to my...
I've just uploaded a full version of 'Yellow Snow' to the Files section. Edits have been to correct seemingly non-deliberate misspellings, make the punctuation...
Although all the FF books had a serious mission and theme to them-I have found certain incidents in certain books hilarious. I have read all the FF books and...
... I am here, having recently spent a few weeks in purgatory with racist relatives. The reason for my longer silence, however, is that back in April or...
Here then are my new Snow 2 paragraphs and slightly edited versions of paragraphs 49 and 88. Unwritten paragraphs: 4 (follows on from 39), 18 (from 49), 67 and...
Per Jorner
pel@...
Aug 12, 2005 1:48 pm
1726
I may as well give this a go and have a stab at 41 and 90. I assume 96 is untaken. If it's not then just change it to a paragraph number that is untaken. 41 ...
maybe the "spread-eagled" part means the barbarian was butt naked David Whyld <dwhyld@...> wrote: I must be missing something because I can't for the...
... 96 is untaken, but it may be best to choose something else anyway (like, um, 46), since you might just have arrived from 95. ... Should this be "well...
Per Jorner
pel@...
Aug 12, 2005 9:32 pm
1730
... (like, ... Good point. ... Yeah it should. Maybe we should go with aristocratic instead? ... I will ... Go ahead. I won't stop you....
Hope this doesn't complicate things too much. 75 You reopen the tin box, which contains an implausibly fresh-looking rosebud and a slightly damp bundle of...
4 The hole is both dark and slimy, like the inside of your small intestine, and you scoff repeatedly at the idea of going down there. A terrible jangling...
Per Jorner
pel@...
Aug 13, 2005 5:11 pm
1733
... This store in Bentleigh does mail orders. I cannot recommend them since I've never ordered from them, though. ...
Robert_A_Mammone@...
Aug 14, 2005 10:30 pm
1734
Christage! I'm getting left behind by the surge of new Snow submissions. I never thought I'd see the day. ... Surely the only real use for Mungo's earrings is...
... In any case, it is possible to visit the toolshed and get the earrings before going to the hut and finding the ice you give to Frangipan. Dept. of petty...
... That's precisely why I never saw that as the purpose of the earrings. ... Is it OK if I just add the last paragraph? I liked the first version better,...
Per Jorner
pel@...
Aug 16, 2005 1:07 am
1739
64 A loud crack, reminiscent of the sound made by a shatterproof ruler being smacked down onto a formica-topped desk, echoes through the passageway, and the...
... Picknitting: should that be "the King's of the Maths Teachers"? I just counted the number of unused paragraphs and came up with 40. Good for a fair number...
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